Thursday 30 November 2017

"I Am" Poem

“I Am” Poem

I Am a Year 6 student from pinehill school.

I wonder how many friends I will make when I go to Northcross intermediate. I hear laughing and people singing in joy. I see birds flying in freedom. I want the animals in zoos become free and enjoying being in the wild.

I am a student from pinehill school. I pretend to be happy when I’m sad  but I’m sometimes happy not sad. I feel nervous when I go up stage or in front of someone. I touch my cat when ever I feel like. I worry about my brother walking by himself when I go to Northcross. I cry when someone part of my family dies or when something goes wrong.

I am a student from pinehill school. I understand that my parents can’t play with us because of work. I say never keep animals in zoos. I dream about getting the best birthday ever! I try best in football training so I can improve myself. I hope I will make a lot of new friends in Northcross. I am a student from pinehill school

Monday 23 October 2017

Narrative


Sleeping through the stormy night, the doorbell rang, Ding dong Ding dong, I woke up in fear, then I slightly opened the curtain, but no one was there. The fear was inside me so I decided to get more sleep. Suddenly I fell off bed, then I woke up and turned the light on for my bedroom. My bedroom was a mess, everything was everywhere, then I heard the doorbell rang again, Ding dong ding dong. I quickly tried to turn the light off but the light wouldn't go off, then I saw the mirror and saw myself with brown hairy hair, Pyjamas on and my face was in fear. Suddenly a loud Bang! I begun to freeze like ice. Squeak...  Squeak... I froze more than before... I couldn't do anything at all. I froze as ice but sweating heavy. I thought about the bang... the door... So I chose to go downstairs to see what's happening. The squeak was getting louder.. As I suddenly tried to turn around, I heard a door open, "Ummm... is anyone there?" I asked but there was no answer, so I decided to go downstairs, then I heard my name "Storm..." I tried not to speak or scream, I ran back to my bedroom with no sounds. Breathing heavy and shaking unstoppably something caught my eye then the squeak came again squeak... squeak... the thing that caught my eye was my wardrobe, so I quickly hid there, then my bedroom door open but there was nothing stepping into my be- the light went off... then the wardrobe opened... I to not get spotted, the light went on again, I hardly didn't breathe but nothing was spotted in my eye... finally I got brave enough to speak. "Hello? is anyone there?" the light went off again, on, off, on... I got terrified, so I ran off to the hallway, I hear footsteps coming and getting closer and faster. The chase has begun... Running and running, to the end of the hallway was getting closer and closer. The sound of the footsteps were getting more quite and more quite. I zoomed into the end of the hallway when there was a loud BANG! I suddenly turned around because of the bang. It was a door smash open and closed. running to the end of the hallway, a door banged opened where the end of the hallway is. I decided to go down stairs really fast and quietly. When suddenly there was footsteps were coming behind me... footsteps getting louder... When suddenly I tripped over by a toy... I rolled down the stairs and I saw black pants with black shoe, then I fainted... BEEP! BEEP BEEP BEEEEP "What happened...?" "What was that... and why am I lying down in my room?" I forgot what happened when I got knocked out. "Black pants and black shoe..." I wondered. "I guess... the terror ended..."

Sunday 15 October 2017

The Chase

Breathing heavy and shaking unstopably, something caught my eye, the the squek came again squek... squek... the thing that caught my eye was my wardrobe. So I quickly hid there, then my bedroom door opened, but nothing was stepping into my bedroom.Tic the light went off, then the wardrobe door opened... I tried to not get spotted , the light went on again, I hardly didn't breathe, but nothing was spotten in my eye. finally I got brave enough to speak, "Hello? is anyone there?" the light went off again, on, off, on... I got terrified, I ran off to the hall way I heard footsteps getting closer and faster. The chase has BEGUN.

Monday 11 September 2017

Inquiry (Why you should put your settings private)


     Why you should put your settings private

Why you should put your settings private? It’s for your safety. You should have your settings private so you don’t give out your personal information, or your house number. When you don’t put your settings private other people might stalk you or tries to kidnap you. Oops I should put my settings private, See ya!
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Inquiry (Why age ratings are there)

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                 Why age
ratings are there


This slide will tell you why age ratings are there. First of all Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram, and Twitter many other things have age ratings. The age ratings are there so you can be safe, but only when if you follow the instruction. Facebook, Snapchat, Twitter and Instagram are only for 13 years old or older. Do you have Snapchat, Facebook, twitter or Instagram?  Do you use it? If you use it, It could mean you lied about your age. It’s okay, but you could get in serious danger.
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Why you should put your settings private? It’s for your safety. You should have your settings private so you don’t give out your personal information, or your house number. When you don’t put your settings private other people might stalk you or tries to kidnap you. Oops I should put my settings private, See ya!

Monday 4 September 2017

Speech (Don't keep animals in zoos)

Do animals belong in the wild? or do animals belong in zoos? animals never belonged in zoos. so today I'm going to talk about why we should not keep animals in zoos.
First of all, when animals get captured by the zoo keepers, how would the animals feel? and not just the captured one, think about the family too. I have a question,  how would you feel when turn into animals and gets caged and lose your family? how would you feel? I would feel sad and scared. 
Another reason why we should not keep animals in zoo is, the animals have a tiny amount of space to play in. You know how bored you can be when you are locked inside a room right? that's how animals feel in a tiny space of room. Here's a fun fact! Did you know, in the wild elephant walks 30 miles a day! That's way bigger then the elephants cage! And lions and tigers loves to climb up walls and run around but they don't have room to run or climb up the walls...
Lastly animals were free in the wild eating, playing, and other things, but when humans got animals in zoos, there was quite a lot of people visiting there so they got more money, so they chose to get more animals. Animals don't like to be caged or treated like that. animals can feel sad in the wild, but way happier then the zoos, but in the zoos they will be sad to be in a cage not in the wild playing with their friends. Some animals gets kicked or get stressed by the people watching. Imagine you are treated like that... I don't even wanna imagine that. But would you like to be treated like that? I will say no.
Now to sum it all up, I talked about why we should not keep animals in zoos, and I wish animals gets free in the wild. 

ANIMALS DESERVES TO BE FREE!!! 

Wednesday 30 August 2017

Writing complex sentences

  1. The girl went shopping because the clothes were on half price.
  2. The phone rang because I had a visitor coming
  3. My mother went to the store so I played games.                                              
  4. My friend came to visit me since I broke my Leg
  5. I enjoy running out doors because everyday we play tag.
  6. The girl rode her bike so she would get there on time.
  7. he ate all of his food because he was hungry.
  8. I bought chips since there was a lot left.
  9. I couldn't play with my friend because he was injured.


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